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Zach
09-03-2003, 09:40 PM
"Cut"

End it,
nobody needs you.
Fuck it,
you don't need anyone.
Don't call,
and ask me for advice.
I hate,
what you are inside.

Fuck it all,
cut the anger out.
Bleed it all away,
run yourself dry.
Fuck you all,
the anger is gone.
You're a corpse inside,
so now you can die.

Talk about,
you hate it all.
Left alone,
kill youself inside.
You're gone,
you left me alone.
Im here,
crying inside.

Fuck it all,
cut the anger out.
Bleed it all away,
run yourself dry.
Fuck you all,
the anger is gone.
You're a corpse inside,
so now you can die.

Fuck it all up.
End it all now.
Cut yourself up.
See if I care how.

Fuck it all,
cut the anger out.
Bleed it all away,
run yourself dry.
Fuck you all,
the anger is gone.
You're a corpse inside,
so now you can die.

augie
09-03-2003, 11:28 PM
Hmm! I liked it. I see how you're releasing anger. But the flow felt kinda hard to get into. It kinda seemed like you were trying to find things to say to fill up empty space, rather than somethign that flowed from your heart, like 99.9% of your writing is like. But I still liked it.

Kassie
09-04-2003, 02:48 PM
It was good. A bit overuse of the blasted f word but, the thot behind it was good!

Lisa
09-05-2003, 08:43 PM
I like all your stuff Zach. This wasn't my favourite of yours but it's still v good. I'd like to hear it as a song, although it'd probably be one of those shouty scary ones..

Zach
09-06-2003, 06:50 PM
it is.

Lisa
09-06-2003, 07:59 PM
Eek. I'm too much of a wimp for scary songs.

faeriedust
09-06-2003, 08:06 PM
i like them...well..depending on my mood.