Love

What is love? Is it hugs, boyfriends, kids? Who knows, the love in your heart is what glows. Is it family, pets, or friends, the love you have inside of you---that never ends. Love, I have a clue, someone you love, that loves you to. :) :pink:

I think you write really good poems. Ther are very good. Dont listen to what asskickery says about them hes just mad cause he has a little bent weiner.

ya he always has some comment you are good stick with what you got

I have not even said anything to this 'poem' yet, and you idiots are already targetting me? I don't have weiner at all.

I actually wasn't planning on commenting on this because it's not poetry. But good job, you drew me out. This is not a poem. It's a crappy musing, of boring orthodox stuff. Your diction is horrible. You are not good at writing poetry. You're taking the same boring old crap and rearranging it to make it even more boring.

It must be fun being a legend, Asskickery.

You don't even have to post and people still reply to you.

Ahaha. Seriously. They give me way too much credit.

I thought it was a cute lil poem


and I think asskickery is a mindless bitch....need I say more?

i havent said anything mean to you how come since they said something you had to start raggin on me i have been being very nice and understanding about what you have had to say lately whats wrong with you.

thanks icecoldsteel and everyone else that thinks my poems are good. it makes me feel good to know that some people like it and dont have something mean to say.

Mindless? The fact that I post a different comment than, "I love it," just proves that I can think for myself. I'm stating me opinion; if I was mindless it would be like everyone elses in the forum, because I would want to conform. You have no logic.

I'm not 'raggin' on you. I'm commenting on your poetry, and your poetry writing. Nice and understanding? You're throwing fits on all the other threads with your poetry. I wouldn't say that you are either one. Lately what's wrong with me? Nothing. I'm acting the same as I always do. You don't know me personally anyway. How would you know if I was acting differently?

Mindless? The fact that I post a different comment than, "I love it," just proves that I can think for myself. I'm stating me opinion; if I was mindless it would be like everyone elses in the forum, because I would want to conform. You have no logic.

I'm not 'raggin' on you. I'm commenting on your poetry, and your poetry writing. Nice and understanding? You're throwing fits on all the other threads with your poetry. I wouldn't say that you are either one. Lately what's wrong with me? Nothing. I'm acting the same as I always do. You don't know me personally anyway. How would you know if I was acting differently?


your an insensitive jerk

How am I being insensitive?

you keep saying that i am always throwing fits when someone says something mean about my poetry but on the last i would say 3 or 4 poems i have been trying to understand what your saying and to see where youre coming from and i havent been being mean but then you had to go and do this and i havent even been throwing a fit at all. stop trying to make excuses about why youre mean to people.

quote: (I actually wasn't planning on commenting on this because it's not poetry. But good job, you drew me out. This is not a poem. It's a crappy musing, of boring orthodox stuff. Your diction is horrible. You are not good at writing poetry. You're taking the same boring old crap and rearranging it to make it even more boring.)

how in the hell is this not poetry. it doesnt have to be metaphorical and it CAN rhyme youre making me think that you think all poetry doesnt ryhme. if so then you dont know what youre talking about.. youre not a legend. just because you can handle all the mean things people say about you doesnt mean your a legend and honestly i think that the only reason people voted for you in the first place was probably to try and get on your good side so you would not put their poetry down and make them feel bad. you are freakin insensitive because for the last few poems i have been trying to be as nice to you as possible and try to be your friend and everytime you looked at my poems you still had something rude to say even though it might have been helpful and i didnt say one mean thing to you... all i asked or said was thanks and what do you think needs to be fixed. get a life.

oh and the only reason people are mean to you is because you are mean to them first.

I'm not worried about why people are mean to me on this forum. I meant that I don't consider this poetry. No I never said poetry can't rhyme. I just said that you are bad at it. You try too hard to rhyme and you loose the meaning.

No...they didn't 'vote' for me to get on my good side. They 'voted' for me by letting me get to them so much that they talk about me outside threads that I'm in, and they try to warn people about me. Nobody should be trying to get on my good side; it's not going to make me change my opinion about their poetry. I take it poem by poem.

Yes, you asked, then I answered. You shouldn't be trying to be my friend in the first place. If I like you, I like you, you shouldn't have to try. If you want to get butthurt and consider all of my comments rude, then go ahead.

'get a life' way to wrap up your post. It pertained so much to the topic you were writing about. That really hurt me.

Stop acting like you're my friend, because this is the internet. I don't personally know anybody on this site except for FiyahKrakah.

i agree that you are a little whiny baby. if you cant take the heat get out, or at least cry to your mommy(unless you already do) because why do we care if someone hurts your feelings? we dont. so get over yourself and take what people give you

i agree that you are a little whiny baby. if you cant take the heat get out, or at least cry to your mommy(unless you already do) because why do we care if someone hurts your feelings? we dont. so get over yourself and take what people give you


WTF? Did you even read the fucking post anyways. have you looked at some of my poems lately... i havent been a fucking whiny baby and if i recall in a couple of your poems you were whining to about what people were saying about it. you need to get over you fucking self. i hadnt even said anything to asskickery and i had been nice to her and she got mad cuz other people were raggin on her. i dont give a fuck wether or not you people care about my feelings or not. actually i could care less but if you dont have something helpful to say then go fuck your self and dont even reply to my poem. whatever.

Short, sweet, and to the point. I liked it!

Good Job and God Bless,
Keri

lilkitchensink, you are the biggest hypocrite in the world. You can't even take criticism. You're in no place to tell others to do so. Who the hell is "we?" Do you suddenly think you're best friends with asskickery now? You're not. Don't ally yourself with people who hate you. For once, get a damn mind of your own and just shut up.

sorry but truthfully it sucks

ok well can you truthfully tell me what needs to be fixed??? fiyahkrakah... what are you talking about im confused cuz no one on this post has that name.

lilkitchensink is lilblondieinpink. She calls me fifuckyourself. It's a cute little game we have going.

I wasn't mad because they were 'raggin' on me. To me it just seemed like they were expecting me. I'm the forum idol, and I didn't want to let my fans down.

I passed the torch to a very deserving successor. I'm proud.

Now, now I'm just a sequel. You're still the 'Kelly Clarkson' of this forum, whereas I'm just the fat 'Ruben' of it. I'm glad I didn't dissapoint.

lol yall two are crazy. fifuckyourself. lol thats funny.

Why is that funny?

The unabridged version of that statement with the contraction translates to: You all two are crazy. I believe the gramatically correct way of stating that would be "You two are crazy."

If I was an idiot I would think that's funny, too. "Hyuk Hyuk, it has 'fuck' in it. Hyuk Hyuk."

bitch i dont give a fuck. ill say it how ever the fuck i want. its funny cuz i fucking said so. i dont have to give you an explanation. neither one of YALL are IDOLS. no one wants to be like YALL. youre fucking crazy if you actually believe that.

Okay. Well, if you said so, it must be funny. I think it's great how you think putting 'yall' in all caps is going to make me angry. It makes me giggle. If you don't want me to be your forum idol, stop voting for me every week.

If you're forum idol, I'm forum dictator. Let's see how many people this comment pisses off.

Alright Il Duce. We'll run with that. We'll have to get you an ass kicking avatar also.

Dictator, motherfucker. Fucking Il Duce, Stalin shit. HAHAHAHAHAH. I'm going to Hell.

Seriously, Castro. The funny thing is people can't vote for you every week like they vote for me. ...but then again you did make the trains run on time.

That's all that matters. I'll control your life and your job and your income, but the trains will run on time to get you to the job I control. A perfect word. Isn't fascism wonderful?

Hey, it's wonderful if I can finally get to work on time, almight train conductor.

I'll change the time your work starts so that you'll be late anyway, because the trains will continue to run on their schedule. Then you'll lose your job, and I'll re-employ you as a keeper of a morgue, just because I can.

I was already the keeper of the morgue.

again like i said i wouldnt vote for you even if it was for a life or death situation. bitch.

Neat. But you still vote for me by posting neat stuff about me in threads dedicated to just me. That's a vote.

again like i said i wouldnt vote for you even if it was for a life or death situation. bitch.

That's neat. Let's say it's a life or death situation. Let's see what you do. I would be curious as to whether you would actually die. If so, I would like to do the honors of killing you. With a plastic hammer and an angry duck.