Kinda need some reviews on this. Originally it was a song but I changed it to a poem...

I composed this song/poem for my AS Music composition. We were given the choice of film and variation music or a song. I chose a song. This won't take up much time to read and if you'd kindly leave your comments/criticisms, it would be greatly appreciated. Thanks.


Love Is Only One Step Away.

I can see love within your eyes
A love which protects us and tells no lies,
A love that will last so pure and strong
I can see love within your eyes.

I can feel love within my heart
A love which gives me strength, wisdom and hope
A love that will last for ever-more
I can feel love within my heart.

I can hear love within your voice
A love which is so full of joy and song
A love that will never be gone
I can hear love within your voice

The structure annoys me, but it's a song, so maybe it's easier to listen to than to read.

it was good