this is about this girl..who i grew to hate..the title still feels generic to me tho..and the last line obviously


Bleed Ignorance

You created something with a razor attatched
Pushed it down my throat
Cut the chords and my voice crashed
Fuck my reasons for your so called pain
If you knew then it would be the
same--everything taken in vain
I wish you could've heard yourself speak
Sometimes the shit you said made you
sound like a fucking freak.
Nevermind this razor-creation!
Fuck this world and its population!
'Cause it's only about you and
the problems that ensue.
Go drown yourself in the sorrows that
no one else knows.
Pretend you cut yourself to watch the blood flow.
Destroy the concept of respect, let no
one know.
Hide behind fake entries-stories of an,
oh so artistic mind.
Lead this life, keep on going as if youre not blind.
Take your fucking razor and cut your last chance
Take your fucking razor and bleed ignorance.
.................................................. .................
every time i read this I get so pissed!!
i hate her so freaking muchhhhh. sorry. venting.

It sounds like lyrics for a metal band.

Too much cussing. It makes it weak. The middle was terrible. I think you should revise this a lot.

i know what you mean on the cussing. perhaps it's a bit of an overload...it is just a rough draft so i will deffinitly revise it. thanks fer the input

I felt that way for a guy before. he broke my heart. very sad, nice poem.

Haha nice, kinky, rawr, nice shoes wanna fuck? WOOp rip out her trachea stick it in a fucking meat blender and crush her skull in with a sledge hammer, then her skull will be shattered like the glass in a mirror from her ugly face looken at it. Holla ;) later
Jen

I agree with fiyahkrakah, too much cussing, although when I read your poem I could feel your anger, as corny as that sounds.