The one n' only
Makes me so lonely
He'd never like me
But I can't not be
Who I am

Short but I want someone to read something and no one is so im gonna keep writing and writing till someone does. i dont mind. i love to write.

No flow. The title sucks. If you're going to be that sucinct you might as well be a little more creative with the word choice.

you love writing? writing what. it had no flow. the last sentence sucked because it all ryhmed until that sentence

That's weird, usually you like every poem in the forums. Were you trying to insult her?

well i definetly didnt like this poem thats for sure

Well, duh. I just don't understand how "You like to write? Write what." is an insult. Something along the lines of, "If you like writing why is this poem only 5 words long?" would have been better.

well maybe you saying it is a good enough insult. what i said sounded good enough to me

And that's why you're not witty.

And that's why you can never beat us at arguing. And that's why your poetry is terrible. It sounds good to you, but it sounds bad to everyone else.

Well then. It's ok people don't like it because I never expected them to. Anyway, some of the best authors ever, are considered the worst by some. And the worst are the best to others.

No, it's okay for people to not like it because they have opinions.

Well, duh.