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curlyfries425
02-06-2005, 10:58 PM
I love you but you'll never know
You make me happy
But you'll never know
I want to hold you in my arms
But you'll never know
You're always on my mind
But you'll never know

Why am I like this
Why can't I just tell you
It's not like you'll go
You'll still be my friend
But I'll never know

Later I say
But it never happens
It will always be like this
But you'll never know

Konstantine
02-07-2005, 10:26 AM
I'm not quite sure if this is supposed to be a song or if it's just a poem but the first stanza/fast has "you'll never know" in it too many times. The middle stanza/chorus I really liked, it flowed nicely. As for the last stanza/verse it's a little too short, it's not as long as the others so it looks sort of awkward.

Jen-Elizabeth
02-07-2005, 05:04 PM
I know what your trying to say in this poem. I think its unigue and I can relate to it perfectly right now.