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ToRtUrEd14
08-11-2003, 02:00 PM
...Yet another poem that I scribbled down. lol

I want to tear you apart
Piece, by piece, by piece
I just want to let the rage out
And let my hate be released

I want to see you crawling
Squirming uneasily in a hole
I want to rip away your lies
And look into your soul

I want to douse my hands
In your blood & tears
I want to be
All your biggest fears

I want to leave a scar
Right across you face
I want to make your body
My anger place

I want you to feel
As numb as me
I wanna make your nightmares
Your reality

zilch
08-11-2003, 02:26 PM
Good Job.

Lollipop*
08-11-2003, 11:17 PM
That's a really nice poem.....it has a lot of emotions in it.