Juss another poem I scribbled down...

Crying on my bedroom floor
I can hardly breath
God, I'm trying to have faith
But it's getting harder to believe

I've prayed night after night
And day after day
I cried out to you, Lord
Just take me away

My eyes are dark
My skin is scarred
Please Jesus
It's getting way too hard

I can't live with the feeling
That I'm only half alive
It's taking all I have
To just barely survive

So Master
I come to you
Give me strength
Give me truth

Give me light
Show me the way
Help me make it
One more day

aww. thats sweet. in a way. lol, i dunno if it was meant to be sweet but i thought it was. :claphands:

It's got emotion, that's good and I can totally and completely relate..however, the rhyme scheme was a bit screwy. I like it though. Just work on it a bit more.

Nice job.

thatz really good
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