This is juss somethin I skribbled down. Some of you may not get it. It's just about people seeing me for what I am on the outside; for what I really am on the inside. And it's about trying to hide what you really are so you "live up to" the standards in today's society. Well, hopefully someone understands it!

ON THE INSIDE

I'm sexy & I'm ugly
I'm human & I'm immortal
I'm sane, yet I'm crazy
On The Inside

I'm invincible & I'm weak
I'm laughing, & I'm crying
I'm sheltered, yet I'm exploided
On The Inside

I'm lovely & I'm hateful
I'm crowded & I'm alone
I'm fearless, yet I'm terrified
On The Inside

I'm healthy & I'm diseased
I'm living & I'm dying
I'm an angel, yet I live in hell
On The Inside

~Let me kno if any of ya can relate to this.~

i really like this alot, and can completely relate to it. it seems pretty simple at first glance, but seems to be a lot deeper as you read into it.

Interesting piece of work... I liked it.; Shopping pretty much summed it up.

i like it....but it reminds me of something. good work!

AWESOME. Good job.
I loved it. Very complex and very true. yay.

Originally posted by grapette513
i like it....but it reminds me of something. good work!

reminds me of "come undone" by robbie williams

"so unimpressed, but so in awe,
such a saint, but such a whore
so self-aware, so full of shit
so indecisive so adamant"

im contemplating, thinkin about thinkin, its over-rated jus get another drink in....

"so in control, so corporate suit,
so damn ugly so damn cute
so well-trained, so animal
so "need your love" so "fuck you all""

im not scared of dyin i just dont want to, if i stopped lying id just disappoint you....:spin: top choon

and by the way, i like the poem :claphands:

really like.
simple....
yet,
can be related to....