You made me cut my wrists
You made me feel the pain.
You took control of me
You took hold of the reins
You steered me the wrong way
You made me hate my life
You hit me, beat me, killed me,
And now there's no more strife...

*CHORUS*
Because I'm gone.
I'm dead and far away.
You tortured me so long,
But I don't have to stay no more
You hurt me,
And you never would've stopped
But I beat you, now it's over.
You lost.
*END CHORUS*

There's no more of my blood
Spilling on the floor
There's no more of your screaming
Cause I am out the door.
There's no more of your punching
The bruises are now gone.
There's no more of anything
Cause you were in the wrong!!!

((Chorus))

You lost....no more
No more of anything
I don't want to do.
You hurt me,
And you never would've stopped.
But it's over.
You lost.

(*Music Break*)

((Chorusx2))

You lost.

did you write that?

yeah, did you?

Nah, I copied it! Of course I wrote it! Lol.

Here's another one:

MASK
There is a guy.
He wears a mask.
He goes around.
All alone.
There is a guy.
Who wants some love.
But doesn't know
Where to find it.

Let's watch him walk around.
Not show his face.
Let's laugh as he falls down.
Without a trace.
Let's tell him what to do.
Since he doesn't know.
Let's see him try to be
The man he doesn't show.

*CHORUS*
Behind that mask
There is a face.
There is a person
Who doesn't know his place.
He tries to hide
From the world.
If only he knew.
I know him.
*ENDCHORUS*

Why does he wear that mask?
I wonder what's behind it.
What's he trying to hide?
I guess we'll never see.
But maybe we can.
Maybe there's a way to know.
Maybe I can see that man.
That man, behind that mask.

(CHORUSx2)

*musicbreak*

I know you.
I know who you are.
I could tell the world.
But I won't.
Because I love
The person
Behind that mask.

Here's one more:

I lived on your lies.
I lived on all that bull you fed me.
I lived on mistakes.
But now I'm done.
Because...

I figured out your game.
Now nothing will be the same.
I know what you had planned.
And you're through.

*CHORUS*
Why'd you do it?
Why'd you blow it?
Why'd you ruin
What you had?
Why'd you mess up?
Why'd you have to be stupid?
You had everything,
But now it's gone.
*ENDCHORUS*

I discovered your path.
You knew this love wouldn't last.
But you went on, with all your lies.
If you think you had me fooled,
Then you're not wise.
Because I knew it,
Through it all.
And I laughed while
I watched you fall.

(Chorus)

It's all gone....
It will never come back...

*music break*

(Chorus)

It's all gone.

i can't write songs to save my life...

Wow, awesome songs.

*applaudes* Lovely Jules! i write some stuff, bit like that.

wow !!!! I am totaly in awe right now...those are good....

im in awe too...those were amazing!!! great job!!

Hm

Originally posted by Dirge
Hm

OoO, I have one....
It's untitled so if you have any suggestions: tell me...
And if you don't like it, PLEASE tell me.


My whole life
Is crashing around me
This whole time
I haven't even been wondering
Where you have gone
All my dreams
Have shattered inside me and I
Don't know where to go.

<Chorus>
::And I've been thinking
Don't you care for me?
Why won't you ring me
And tell me
Everything's okay
I've been waiting
My phone ain't ringing
To tell me
You're coming home today::

Your whole world,
Must be wonderful for you.
You don't understand
What you put me through.
I guess I'll wait
For you.
I guess I'll stay
For you.

<Chorus>

<*Storm sounds*>
As I wait by the phone
For you to ring,
I am alone.
You and I are done
But you are my only
One

<Chorus>

My whole life,
Has crashed around me,
For so long,
I've been wondering,
Why have you done this to me?
Why don't you just ring,
And come back to me?

<Chorus> fade out.


Uhhh...it's not my best, but it is my most recent. LoL.

Oh, and also, my friend, Joanna, and I are starting a band...if you have name ideas tell me (we are two girls so nothing masculant...lol) Could you help?

erm name it nothing masculant??

Uh, by that I mean nothing that sounds boyish or whatever, cos I AM a girl you know...lol

Haven’t you post this before CrazedLunatic

Totally awesome poems guys. CrazedLunatic u really had me there. Those songs u wrote were just amazing. u dont know how much i want to meet u in real life. mickey mouse,urs were good too.