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Slave4You
12-08-2004, 07:10 PM
Any comments would be appreciated, even if you say it was the worst. :D

Dead :

The things I did for you, the days I've cried,
I've sat through everyday, with all of your lies,
Tormenting and paining me, leaving bruises,
Why do you always have all these excuses...

Day after day, you questioned me,
but when I was gone, you felt you were free,
Free to be around another girl, to look, to touch,
Never again, will this hurt me so much...

From all the tears and days I've cried,
You've sat through all of this and denied,
Denied the fact you questioned all of me,
Never again will we disagree...

I laid in bed wishing I was dead,
Many times I wish I'd just bled,
I picked up the knife and put it to my wrist,
Never again will I exist...

imported_madden
12-09-2004, 12:23 PM
I LOVE IT! IT TOTALY ROCKS








wow i must be speaciel to be the first one to reply......:D :D

Slave4You
12-09-2004, 03:50 PM
Originally posted by madden
I LOVE IT! IT TOTALY ROCKS








wow i must be speaciel to be the first one to reply......:D :D

Thankyou so very much!! :) And yes, very special! :p

*nem_szeretsz*
12-09-2004, 04:11 PM
Nice poem.

Slave4You
12-09-2004, 04:12 PM
Thankyou :)

wackyllama123
12-09-2004, 04:18 PM
It was awesome!! :cool:

Slave4You
12-09-2004, 04:19 PM
Originally posted by wackyllama123
It was awesome!! :cool:

Thankyou! :laugh: