i woke up
from a sound sleep
to find the house dark.
i yawned, stretched, checked the time,
and thought of you.
sitting here in my room,
i feel so alone in this world.
sitting here in my room
i'm waiting for you.
waiting to see you
and your starry eyes.
i'm waiting, max.
will you come?
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~if i had told you how much i loved you
would you have stayed?
if i had spent more time with you
would you have never left?
when i told you i'd miss you
i should have kissed you.
but i never knew
we might never see each other again.
now you're gone
and my heart
will never
be
the same
again.

I liked the second one the best, The 1st one, just doesn't do anything for me, although it is nice. I've improved my poems, and it's almost certain you will too, keep up the good work. :)