*this isnt the best poem but my best friend says that it has good rhyming...tell me what u think*

you wanted to kiss me real bad,
so a first kiss we had,
before i never felt a thing,
i knew you liked me, but i thought all i would get was a fling,
now i cant stop thinking of yesterday,
havnet seen you but deep down inside there is a doubt,
rumors about you have spread,
that all you do is try to get girls in bed,
i said from me you wont get shit,
you said you werent looking for it,
still the rumors now and then catch m y thoughts,
all i could do was think of you, acting like a robot,
i thought about you all day yesterday, all of today, too,
i still havent made my decision, i dont know what to do,
when i see you again ill prolly have my decision,
but it seems trying to find you is a hard mission,
today i didnt see you at all,
i waited for you to call,
when i say im cofused i tell myselfto shutup,
cuz really im wondering if this was just a hookup

First of all: I have to say, I LOVE your s/n. Spinner Mason is SOOO hot, especially now that he's lost weight, but I have to say, I liked him, even when he was chubby. As for the poem, it was good. It displayed a lot of emotion, and I can definately relate to the situation, which makes it all the better to read.

Good Job and God Bless,
Carrie

thanks...it took me like ten minutes to write it...yeah spinner is sooo hott...did u see the episode where terri is self conscious and hes walking toward her telling her thats shes beautiful?...i saw that episode b4 but the next time i saw it he nearly took my breath away...he was so hott!

That poem almost made me eyes bleed of boredom...

that poem almost made my eyes bleed from lack of talent. somethinga 3rd grader could write.

Originally posted by angelundercover
that poem almost made my eyes bleed from lack of talent. somethinga 3rd grader could write. <3

Grammar=bad
Punctuation=bad
Poem=terrible