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neo1
09-17-2004, 11:26 PM
Give me medication
Send me a pill
Drug up our nation
And we'll give into your will
Tell us who to be
And fix us when we're wrong
It's hard to be me
When you won't let me carry on

You feed the fires and you fan the flames
I won't give into your ****ed up games
My will is not something i'll let you take
You're slowly taking over, but i won't be the same

While the TV's message blares
The truth's hidden within
Noone seems to care
That we're giving in
Hollywood's the authority
And everyone else is wrong
It's hard to be me
When you won't let me carry on

You feed the fires and you fan the flames
I won't give into your ****ed up games
My will is not something i'll let you take
You're slowly taking over, but i won't be the same

The media's taking over, nothing but regret
They say all that matters is giving into sex
but they're mistaken, i know that they're wrong
They won't let me be me, but i'll still carry on

You feed the fires and you fan the flames
I won't give into your ****ed up games
My will is not something i'll let you take
You're slowly taking over, but i won't be the same

TrueConfessions
09-17-2004, 11:57 PM
It was really good. I particularly liked how you used fire in it.

imported_shelagh
09-18-2004, 08:16 AM
I think it's a brilliant song. As a poem, I would love to paste this onto Poet's Corner, but my website is rated for all ages (including the very young) so I can't use swear words (not even starred swear words). I don't find any of the words offensive, you have used a swear word in a constructive way that works. Good luck with your writing, you have real talent.

pinklover88
09-19-2004, 03:27 PM
The message was clear. That's a good thing. I think it could've been worded a bit better, but all-in-all I liked it.

Good Job, and God Bless,
Carrie