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Mandee Rayne
08-31-2004, 05:37 PM
Tossing and turning and moving about. I can't wait to see how you turn out.

I dream of you everyday, of how you're going to be. You already mean so much to me.

Not too long ago, I found out you were going to be a girl. Which is wonderful just like the sentimental value of a pearl.

We've chosen a name and we know it already fits you. But for now, we'll call you our little Boo.

I feel you everyday moving around, I sing to you every night and I hope you like that sound.

I want to sing to you so you can relax while you sleep. Your eyes are closed and your lips are tight, not to let out the slightest peep.

I'm so excited to meet you, only 3 1/2 more months to go. I'm getting a belly and starting to show.

I can feel your tiny hiccups and your little turns. There's so much from you I have to learn.

I love you everyday more and more. I can't wait to see your face for me and everyone else to adore.

I'll wait for you and pray, that you'll be here soon someday.

My little angel. Mommy and Daddy wait for you. We Love you

We know that one day, you'll say you love us too.

~*Rayne*~
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I know it needs some touching up here and there, but it's one of those " Wrote it in 30 seconds " type of poems.

mEsSeD uP
08-31-2004, 06:23 PM
Awe such a sweet poem *tear*, good for a 30 second one, well done :)

imported_Poisoned Eternity
08-31-2004, 07:05 PM
I thought it was really good, actually I liked how it was set up and everything. not a bad poem at all.

But the font color killed it for me. Ouch.

Mind checking out "Stirred From A Dream?" If you get hte time.

Mandee Rayne
08-31-2004, 07:16 PM
LOL sorry for the color, I always change my colors, i hate being just regular BLACK FONT. But Thank you for your inputs. I appreciate the honesty. I'm glad you liked it.

I'm 6months pregnant and I figured I'd write something about it. Since it is my first time. I figured writing about the experience would be nice. :-D

~*Rayne*~