The clock ticks,
tick
tick
tick.
And all I see
is
your
face.
I wanted to
show
you
everything.
I wanted to
caress
you
softly.
I wanted to
love
you
unconditionally.
But the clock
ticks
ticks
ticks.
And you will
disappear
like
the wind.

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Hiya, I think that poem is great, I like the rhythm of it and the simplicity of the lines. The ending is fantastic though, especially the last sentence. Thanks for posting this and keep writing.

Love, Shadow.

:D

This is good! i like the way its very simple but very good at the same time