this might be last poem I dont known

everything around me has failed
i cant prevail any further
i hope the devils come to eat my heart
it always fell like a guns to my head
i just wish that the person with the gun would pull it
the distortion of my life would not make a difference in my family
i wish i had a gun sometime so i can end my life
only 1 shoat would take it.

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here is another poem

NEVER GOING TO BRAKE THROW
darkness around me it keeps me blind
only if I held the real true thing in my life
part of my life is dead
only if I could brake throw this darkness to be free
my eyes bleeding as I try to open them
I fear I will never leave the darkness........:biggun:

Not bad.

wow. not too shabby