This is areyouhappynow's little brother. I will be posting more poems but heres another one I hope you like it!

My Life Is On Thin Ice

My life is on thin ice
theres nothing anybody can do
the little voices inside
tell me to break through
I try not to listen
but the voices are to loud
sometimes they just make me
want to die
I try not to listen
But the voices
Have taken comand



This is the 2 poem I have ever written!

Nice! Keep on working on the poems. I think you might wanna stop writing about death your freaking me out! But any way great poem!! Luv always!!~megan

Lol, I get the sig. I liked the poem, you've got talent for a 10 year old, but maybe you should try writing about happy stuff. Do what normal 10 year olds do, be happy, like balloons, watch tv, I dunno, I don't remember when I was 10. Oh wait, inspiration lol. Cya.

thanks for your response!! You've been very nice 2 me!! thanks again i will try to write more happy poems but don't count on it!!~mike lol

sorry wrong name!! lol that was my sisters!!

thanks every body so please respond!!!!!! thats all i have to say thank you for your time

voices aren't usually a good sign.

i dont really have voices in my head :rolleyes: that would lead to crazy stuff like this:kill:

thanks for posting

Like I have said you may want to see someone for help. On the other hand I want you to be your own person and not like all little 10 year old boys. The voices you write about may not be real in your head but they do exist in other peoples heads. I once had voices that hated me and wanted me to die or "Break through the thin ice" but I wouldn't be here today if I hadn't gotten help. If you are serious about any of this please get help. I can really relate to your poem it's a good poem very well writen. Have a nice day.

~Forever~
*Crazy*
>Me<

once again i dont think about myself when i am writing i think of other people and i have a very nice life

Thanks

:thmbup: :clapping:

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a word of advice, TEENspot is no place for a ten year old, i forbid you to go into sex questions!

i liked your poem though?

It was good for your second ever poem.

Good Job and God Bless,
Carrie

thanks and i would never go on sex questions i spelt that wrong

enjoy

its a good poem for a 10 year old! Good Job! Yea, maybe u should write bout happy stuff, but ur still good..

thanks

Originally posted by RockRunner
thanks and i would never go on sex questions i spelt that wrong

Ya, ya don't lie, I can see you going on there when nobodies watching...