hell i truly am
its time to leave
it all adds up
death is percieved

taste this blood
understand the lies
ill die alone
for alone i would cry

distant sense
depressers block
so unaware to hurt myself
when all else was lost

bleed for me i will once more
refresh myself again
overcoming the feeling
tears upon my wrist, now hid



(tell me what you think of this...it is one of my most recent poems..criticism is respected, thanks)

anyone have any insight?

I think it's good but I don't think it's that good...

thank you, im trying to get better as i let everything out as well, tough stuff but ill get the hang of it...:confused:

i like the last stanza but some of the lines dont really make sense to me.. but it was an overall good poem good job keep writin :)