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africanbeauty
07-21-2004, 02:39 PM
A soul as cold as ice, a face i dont reckognize
so many time i try, but like the truth u hide
now i no longer pry, i made the choice 2 resign
from days of loving you, from days of haunting you
from days of touching you, to days of wanting you
only wanting you 2...
kiss me, touch me, rub me da right way
just whisper in my ear
tell me everything u want
they're just as soon yours my dear
12 months of love
365 days of fear
anticipation of 1 moment,
the whole entire year

I don't know what i think about this poem, i just wrote it 1 day and i wanted 2 submit something so i decided 2 put this in. i think it's ok so i wanna know what y'all think...:D

genie
07-21-2004, 04:59 PM
i really like that poem it sounds cool senorita,


but dont mind me askin i dont get the 5th last line it just doesnt make sense, or is it me?

africanbeauty
07-21-2004, 07:52 PM
oo thanx 4 replyin
i think maybe u didnt get it bcuz i wrote their instead of they're