What are you talking about?
Saying these words that you don't mean?
You sounds like you love me,
But boy,this is deeper than it seems.
Your making it harder to walk away,
Though I know I have to,
But I love you,your all I want,
How do I leave you?
You won't stop going on,
With all those crazy words,
I don't know what to do,
This is getting obsurd.
I love you and you know it,
You won't let me go.
What do I do,Is this true?
I really don't know.

eh.. I don't have any energy to be critical...

That poem's really awesome!

Here's one that I wrote:

Depression and confession,
All the same to me,
Nothings like illusion,
Nothings ment to be.
They're both the same,
Because you become a different person,
You always, always get the blame,
Nothing ever changes.
Your mind gets filled up with crap,
You feel helpless, weak, and trapped.
You can't think straight,
You block images.
Your friends put so much pressure on you,
You practically suffer.
Everyday one word meets the eye,
Of course that word is suicide.
Life is a learn experience,
You either take it or give it.

Okay yah so it's not really a gr8 poem. But i wrote it so i thought it mite be good! lol!

ur poem was awesome tho! :-D

good work.

Let me guess, you go to a public school?

I got a public school, is that bad?

What is so bad about public school?I go to public school and am probably smarter than a bunch of ya'll(not counting the fact that I am also younger than most of ya'll).

lol. well i go to a public skool, but school doesn't inspire me. so i get Cs and Ds... :(

patria

time paints this canvas with end
the time when bloodless warriors will raise their swords again
to retrieve their beloved lands
at the cost of every man
to meand her scaved landscapes from human depravation
from this day our motherland will neigh nevermore
I tell you, she will not be the humans' feeble whore
we will guard her innocence with our lives
we will fight until every man dies
the death we bring will suffice her roots with great elation
when we are done, the earth will be cleansed of its disease!
as we march through the ruins of this modern civilization.

that's nice.I like going to summer camps and stuff.Being in the quest program is cool because you get to go on awesome 3 day long trips that really inspire you to think.