Life is what you make
of it. Doesn't take
Long to leave
Its what we weave
Failing isn't falling
Or stalling
But its not getting up
Sitting like a lump
They say saints are just the sinners that fall down
And get up. Don't drown
You won't
Can't
Fail life
Unless you take the knife
Success is won by many
Failing shouldn't be done by any
You can't fail anybody or anything
Except yourself

it was alright. it was interesting, but didnt really grab me in.

I like it.....I like how you cut off the sentences and stuff.

They say saints are just the sinners that fall down
And get up


I like that line ;)

I really like the last two lines. Nice job.