and it's petals
fall
from
the never-know
ing something.
and the flower
ing being (that
is what
it is) is weav
ing in
and out of the
nothingness at
be(cause the
night is
s i l e n t:
)i serve as
the bridge between what we all know
and what we only think
is the answer
to war
to hate

(love is what it is?)

to the gun under my pillow/
to my head

f a l l i n g
forever into the blind
man's unbias

Eh? I don't get it. Maybe this is too deep for me? What were you trying to express with the parenthetical stuff, and the spaces between letters, and the slashes?

I like it a lot..
but like NeonPinkRainbow I don't understand the spaces, slashes, and parenthesises (sp?). I guess it gives the poem character and it's probably your style of writing. :)

it would look cool painted on something, or in some art form. but in it's typed form, it seems too plain. I liked the style though. something different.

it's very e.e. cummings...i like it, although it is quite deep. i'll have to give it another good, close reading. i just like the way it seems, though. the way it flows.