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music-smart
03-30-2004, 07:55 PM
I wish I could tell my sister the truth,
I wish i could tell her I am always there,
I wish I could tell her I loved her,
I wish I could the be the reason why she lives,
I wish she would follow her heart,
I wish she wouldnt feel like a outsider,
I wish she knew what her purpose was,
I wish she knew that she doesnt have to be everything to every one,
I wish she wouldnt worry,
I wish she knew she was pretty,
I wish she knew she is everything to me,
I wish she would just relax,
I wish she wasnt so much like me with putting preasure on herself,
I wish she knew her boyfriend really loved her,
I wish she knew every person she knows loves her,
I wish she knew who she was,
I wish I could tell her things,
I wish that she could understand me,
I wish she knew I am just like her,
I wish she knew she is not alone,
I wish she knew its not her who is shy its them,
I wish she knew every thought I thought,
I wish she could be happy,
I wish she didnt want to die,
I wish she was here,
I wish she could see me crying,
I wish she could see my pain,
I wish she wouldnt have to put the fake smile she puts on,
I wish she knew she is the reason why I am still here,
I wish she knew who I was,
I wish she knew she is my Idol,
I wish she could have everything she wanted,
I wish she didnt feel alone because she's not,
she has me.

Mz. Poetic Flow
04-01-2004, 12:11 PM
Wonderful thats all i can say

Genieinabox...
04-01-2004, 08:12 PM
sounds like my sister.

Good Job and God Bless,
Genie

Genieinabox...
04-01-2004, 08:12 PM
sounds like my sister.

Good Job and God Bless,
Genie

21CenturyJester
04-01-2004, 08:15 PM
I know it's the purpose of the piece, but there are too many 'I wish's.

Also, the last line isn't an 'I wish', but all the others are.

21CenturyJester
04-01-2004, 08:15 PM
I know it's the purpose of the piece, but there are too many 'I wish's.

Also, the last line isn't an 'I wish', but all the others are.