The light gets darker
And the space gets smaller
I know you don't care
But I know you do
Just hold on...

Cause I'd do anything for you
Just to see you smile again
The sun is lazy, but I know it'll be here soon
I'll stand right here, close your eyes
Never fear the darkness

I know the floor is getting colder
The blood seems to close
Keep it flowing through you
Feel me holding you
Hush, and feel safe

Cause I'd do anything for you
Just to see you laugh again
The clouds are heavy, but I know they'll leave
I'll be right here, go to sleep
Never fear the darkness

*chills* Wow *more chills* 2nd stanza!!!!!!! Love it!!!!!!

Oh yeah.... like the new name. :)

Oooo Thanks and thanks!!!! :)

I love the poem, it reminds me of....sumthin
I dunno
*shrugs*

hehe

haha

you say haha to my poem? :mercy:

This is a way cooler poem than my little prayer. Actually it's better than all the other poems I've written in my life.

OMG!!! Don't say that!! All poetry is beautiful and there is no way to measure them. If a poem touches your heart, thats all that matters. I love your poem. :D