It takes way too much of an effort to mess with the spacing. Please visit the link, and give me so harsh criticism on this one. Thanks.

www.geocities.com/matthew_f_ferguson/correspondent

That poem is amazing, i love the emotion behind it very nice:) of course i dont know that much about poetry but i liked it

awesome. that spacing was just killer. my only real criticism would be doing some spacing with that last little stanza at the bottom, and im divided on that. i like how the last line is flushed on the right side, almost brought up as a sort of afterthought, yet i think with such vivid language as "should i fall on my curved blade", you could do some serious stagger work.

as i said, im on the fence, but either way it was a great read.