she tried to grab a star,
but as she reached out
it burned her hand
leaving her with callouses
the size of her broken heart,
and a scar to remember.
she asked herself,
"why is it the beautiful things
that when we get close enough
you cant touch. and they burn you
as if to mock the fact
that you'll never be
as glorious as them?"
with her hand at her heart
she looked up at the stars,
and through tears she said,
"i dont need you to light up my sky.
i am beautiful, and golden and celestial.
i dont need you to make me feel secure
because im my own shining light.
i'll make a wish on myself from now on,
because when i depended on you
nothing ever happened."
it started to rain, and she couldn't decipher
which tears were hers,
and which belonged to the stars.
she tried to grab a star,
but it wasnt there.
with her head down she whispered
"im sorry."

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awww..i love it soo much. it's really really good.

'ISN'T IT IRONIC"...lol all day at work i been thinking up a song called 'to touch a star"...

*Hi steph*

thank you very much shandi.

ironic? yes.

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very good

that was awesome

Wow. Your writing never ceases to amaze me.

Steph, that is gorgeous...your writing is always okay, but this really floored me. Had no idea you could do that. Wow. Awesome indeed.

Don't know what else to say...constructive thought has left my mind. So, um, rockin'...

ever so poetic lol it was great

it started to rain, and she couldn't decipher
which tears were hers,
and which belonged to the stars

That was my favourite part. I really liked that. :) ALOT! good job!

i loved that part to. its really great writting. i dont know what UnicornDreams tyalkin about i love ur stuff. i will agree with her that its one of your finest though. i mean this is sooo good. i have no critizisms. write more for me to read and comment on

thanks to all of you :)

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