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StillDreaming
12-28-2003, 09:23 PM
The One I Lost

I sit and wonder about you at night
The melody of our song plays through my mind.
I can’t seem to forget you.
The lyrics buzz through my head.
All I can think of is you
Did I do something wrong?
I am starting to think I made the worst mistake of my life.
The only person I have ever loved,
And I let you go
Wat was I thinking?
I remember the all too familiar way that you held me,
Kissed me gently,
Whispered sweet words into my ears.
I miss that
I miss the one person I always felt safe with
Did make the biggest mistake of my life?
I think of you in her arms and it makes me sick.
I’m supposed to be the only one you ever love.
You were supposed to be mine for all of time.
I made a big mistake,
And now there is no going back
You have her and im just gunna have to deal with that.
So ill cry myself to sleep
Thinking of you
Of what we had together.
In my heart you’ll always be the one that can never be replaced.
My one true love
Ill remember you with one single tear.
Glistening in the light,
A memory of what we had….

imported_Smurf@2099
12-29-2003, 04:31 PM
I like it...But you realy should take out "Buzz"...It realy distracts from the rest of it...Other then that...I think it could be better if you rewrote it ina more solid format...But its your emotion...do with them what you will