BLACK BLOOD

Moonlight creeps into my room
The air is thick with doom
This object grasped in my right hand
Looks quite beautiful and grand

My eyes go blind I cannot see
My soul is chained, un-free
My mind goes blank darkness takes me
My right hand moves with glee

The object falls to the floor
Someone screams, �gNo more!�h
To only find it�fs me who screamed
My left arm starts to bleed

Black blood drips and flows quietly, staining the wooden floor
My head goes numb with shock as my contents are spilled some more
All goes black there is no light, only fire, ash and dust
The air is thick and musty, the very smell of rust

A feeling that I�fm familiar with starts behind my back
I fall hopeless to the ground a whip is heard with a crack
Demons are everywhere, laughing as they beat
Beating the newcomers, of this horrific keep

Cries of pain are heard, as I realize it�fs just me
A slave I am, nothing more as the scars grow skin deep
More cackled laughter and cries of fear
More scars engraved and tears

The cell grows darker and drums are heard
Everything is twisted into a blur
The heart that I no longer have
Is filled with death and anger

My life is wasted, ripped and torn
Filled with nothing, but forlorn
Under a graveyard, inside hell
Is now forever my prison cell�c

-Sandra (me)

this would be better if u didn't force so much rhyming. u twisted your grammar around just to make stuff rhyme, and that's not cool. Just let it out the way it comes to mind.

I like it. It has alot of character.