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Angel To You
09-02-2003, 09:00 PM
Everyone says its together we'll be
(I'm trying)
But its not them, its finally me
(I'm trying)
I'm finally ready to say good-bye
(Really)
I cant help thats its always you on my mind
(Really)
So take this as a final chance
(Its so hard)
Make me feel your romance
(Its so hard)
I wont let go
(I promise)
I will no longer be alone
(I promise)




..........Ok so I said on someone elses poem when commenting that I dont really like love poems...right? Dont even ask where this came from I pulled it outta my ass and ......Anyway this is really rough form and all so...be easy on the grading...PLEASE!!!!

Promosapian
09-02-2003, 09:06 PM
could u break it down and explain it to me, it appears as if there is contradiction in it...